Kay Kay

Blackmailed???? That sounds too modern to be in this story. I've been reading this from the beginning and love it. I can't wait to see what jane is going to ...

You know you're going to have a bad day if: 1. you are gothic and find that your mom has gone through your closet and replaced everything in pink. 2. ...

I don't believe in them myself either but i do believe that there are demons and evil spirts but ghosts. No way. My friends believe in the wegie (Can't spell) ...

Sounds interesting can't wait to read more

Do you believe in ghosts??? I'm curious on how many people on here do i think it would be interesting.

Interesting. I'm slightly confused but it seems to be a good way to catch the readers attention.

Okay I was sitting here bored out of my mind when I came up with this. Funny things that predict how the rest of your day is going to be. ...

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I used to hate rhyming poems and thought they were pointless, but I think maybe I've got something going. I'll try to have more soon.

I had the craziest dream last night. It was so funny. Anyways. In the dream I'm walking down this dark path surrounded by trees and I'm all scared. I hear ...

I liked it but it needs work. Add more detail and imagery. I see that the person has just killed themselves out of lonliness. I don't know if that is ...

The Purple Balloon covered everything I was going to say. I will add that to me it is choppy if that makes any sense. Add punctuation where it is needed ...

They have pretty much covered it. But what I can personally add in is that not only is it too short, but is sort of choppy if that makes sense. ...

I absolutely loved the fourth stanza. I was wondering too if perhaps the narrator is refering to the past or not. Besides that no crit.

Hey welcome to YWS! Obligatory??? Wow. That is something new to see. Don't hesitate to PM me about anything. See you around the site!!

Hey welcome to the site!! I'm Kay Kay and don't hesitate to ever PM me about anything.